The red ship, the yelo ship and the wuden ship wer fighting. There
Great descriptions Jack!
The evil pirates are attacking the good pirates for shiny gold.
Well done Adam I like the adjective ,shiny
Good feedback Jake, can you think of anything that Adam can improve?
Good boy Adam, I like how you used an adjective to describe the gold. Can you think of an exciting opener for your sentence?
Watching pirates ov the Caribbean tonight for research
I love that film, good research Jake!
In the middle of the deep blue sea, the evil pirates are attacking the good pirates for shiny gold
Adam you have fogot your foolstops.....
What an amazing opener Adam! Do you think you could use Skye's advice to improve your sentence?
Amazing Adam I really like your description
Good boy Adam your sentance is realy good.
What do you like about Adam's sentence Skye?
Brilliant sentence Adam, I like the way you've added a great opener. I wonder if you could add a conective too?
The cat sat on the scruffy, old brown mat.
On top of the ship is 1000 gold and shiny magic crowns.
The ship was very big with a cannon ball.
It had pirates with black teeth and some of the pirates without teeth.
Wowzers, your sentences are fabulous. You certainly have used your phonics brain to help you with your sounding out. Can you write a sentence with a connective in it?
One sunny morning the nasty and ugly pirates were fighting for shiny and precious golden gold because they had no gold.
I love your sentence Ruby, it is the best! Maybe you could include some more adjectives.
The evil pirate is using rock hard caninballs to sink the good ship.
That is a fab sentence Jack, I like how you have described the pirate as evil. Can you think of a more exciting adjective than good?
The hot, marvellous sunset shines brightly on us whilst we are walking home with my dog Jasper.It is exciting holding his lead.
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