He quickly escaped from the creeper .
Wow, I love how you used an adverb to describe how he escaped. Why was he escaping? Can you think of a connective you could use to improve this sentence?
i agree whith miss sandy lucas but i say you are better than me clever boy lucas
Good work Lucas, but could you write how he escaped.
I fink that he got out very quick and sow a nub creeper
WOW what an amazing sentence Finley there is just one problem you have spelt think wrong it is think not fink.
Very kind and helpful feedback Phoebe. Well done.
Good boy Finley. Do you think you could add some punctuation at the end of your sentence?
chapter 2.When the creeper burst Steve's house the creeper died BUT...when Steve crawled out of the rubble he didn't know the creeper was dead so he built a bigger stronger house with a trap behind the door and waited for the next three weeks to catch the creeper but the creeper never returned.
Wowzers. What an amazing chapter Phoebe. I love how you have used lots of connectives.
The mine craft man built a house and forgot to put a door on, so a creeper came and made a hissing noise and the house exploded. The next time the mine craft man built his house again he put a door on the house to be safe but forgot to shut it and went to bed. The creeper came and the house exploded once again.
Well Done I built that house and thats what it reminds me of
Jorja hendy his name is Steve and a creaper would not just blow up your house it would just try to kill you instead.
Steve builds a mansion and a huge wave of creepers come in and blows every piece. And a huge wave of endermen and takes tons of blocks .A zombie comes breaks the door down
Good idea on chapter 2 Phoebe
Good comment Josh.
Wow year 2 we love your sentences about the Minecraft video.
I think it will blow up and then Steve will build a house out of obsidian which is a strong , black and purple block which can't be blown up.
I think Steve will haft to build a diffarant house again but he will halft to put down an ion door then the creeper cant get in.
Im missin year 2 soooooooooooooooooo much and its not to hard in year 3 but it was easier in year 2.ohhhhhhhohhhhhhohhhhhhho that creepy creeper.And im sure it will get sooooooooooooooo harder threw the year and it feels wierd being a junyer and having a locker insted of a tray.
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