One sunny morning the fluffy cute Scottish Fold cat was relaxing on the white clean mat.
Wowzers, that is an amazing sentence Ruby! I love how you have added exciting vocabulary, changed the opener and included the correct punctuation. Maybe next time you could add a connective.
I think your work is amazing.
Love it Ruby! I think your proper noun (with capitals!) make you sentences much more specific. Clever girl!
Wow Ruby good job like Miss Sandiford try and add a connective:D
In the sunny morning the soft Munchkin cat was relaxing on the purple, fluffy mat because it was so tired from last night.
This is another super sentence Izzy, I like how you remembered to use a comma after the word purple. Do you think you could write a where, who, what sentence to improve this sentence?
I love that you changed the opener, used adjectives and used a connective. Well done you are a wagoll.
I love how you used the word Munchkin in your work WELL DONE Izzy.
Clever girl - this is a super sentence. Are there any words you could make even better?
good job izzy you have added a comer in it. It defently is a wagoll:D
One snowy night the tabby cat sat peacefully on the yellow furry rug next to the warm fireplace so it could get comfortable and sleep through the night.
What an amazing writer you are Jack, this sentence really captured my imagination and gave me a picture of a snug house on a winters night. Well done! Could you give a friend some feedback on their sentence?
thank you jack. I loved how you changed the opener and used adjectives. I think you could look at your punctuation to check you have commas.
Brilliant sentence Jack! I think you've use some great vocabulary here. I agree with Izzy - I think you've missed a comma in your sentence. Can you see where it should go?
Jack M this wonderful exilant peace of work:D
In a house a cat sat on a old green fluffy hairy mat.
Good boy George, you have changed the sentence to a 'where, who, what' sentence. You have added lots of super adjectives. Can you improve your sentence by adding commas to your list?
In a house a cat sat on a old' green'fluffy'hairy mat.
Good effort George! I like that 'where' opener.... what kind of house is it?
brill George ill tell your sister about this:D
You have shown me that you know where the commas should be, well done. I will show you where the comma key is tomorrow.
On a rainy day an old cat sat on a rotten and boring mat.
I lice the wrd rotten. Well dun Louis.
That is a super opener Louis, well done. Can you add a connective to your sentence and give me some more information?
I think yours could be longer but good work
Good feedback Lucas. I like the way you have told Louis that his work is good as well as telling him what he could improve?
What is the best part about the sentence?
Good effort Louis. I am interested to know why you cat is sitting on the mat. Can you extend your sentence to tell us?
well done i love the word rotten i have the pic in my mind now
The cat sat on the cumfi mat.
Good girl Lacey, I love how you have added an adjective to your sentence. Can you think of an adjective to describe the cat?
Good girl. I love the word 'comfy' to describe the mat!
i love it next time try and add an opener
and good punctuation
the cat sat on the soft rug.
Wow, well done JJ! You have included an adjective in your sentence. A sentence should always start with a capital letter, can you add one to your sentence?
good remember a capital letter but you did a full stop:D
The cat sat on the soft rug.
Much better, well done!
Well done for improving your sentence! I love your describing word. What does the cat look like?
good job for improving it
One sunny morning Toby the tabby cat snuggled up on a rainbow fury mat and whent to sleep after a long and hard day.
Super sentence Phoebe. I can just imagine him snoozing no wih yourbrilliant descriptions. Can you spot a spelling mistake that you could improve?
that is exilant good job
One sunny morning the pink cat sat on the blue mat because she thought that was the comfiest mat in the hole world.
Brilliant Skye! I'm impressed that you used 'because' to extend your sentence.
What an amazing sentence Skye. You have used some amazing adjectives, a super opener and included a connective. Well done! Comment on a friends work to give them some feedback too.
wow Skye i really like your sentence . .
On a very very cold night the ginger cat called Rosie curled up on a mat in front of the fire to get the her paws warm.
Oooooh! That is a super sentence Summer. I love that you remembered a capital letter for a proper noun.
The big cat sat on the hairi mat.
Wow, I love your sentence Jack. I am super impressed that you added an adjective to describe the cat and one to describe the mat. Well done. Can you add a connective to your sentence?
In the sky scraper the big fat ginger cat sat on the shiny legendary mat.
The big cat sat on the hairi mat with a mouse.
Good boy Jack. How might the mouse be feeling? I think I would probably describe him as terrified because the cat might eat him!
One stormy night the ginger cat sat on the bright new mat and couldn't get to sleep.
Good boy Adam. You have used a fabulous opener, some super adjectives and a connective. Why couldn't the cat sleep?
The fluffy and black cat is siting on amazing mat
What a super sentence Lucas. I like how you have used the words fluffy and black to describe the cat. What does every sentence need to end with?
tne cruisey cat sat on rainbow mat and playing.
Thank you for visiting our blog Millie. You have made a good start. Read your sentence again to check it makes sense.
One sunny day, the chocolate brown cat sat patiently, on his mat waiting for his yummy food.
Wow! What an amazing sentence Spencer. I love how you have used an adverb in your sentence to describe how the cat was sitting. Do you think you could give a friend some feedback on their sentence? Don't forget to be kind and helpful.
I love how you used the word patiently and yummy. I also like your opener.
Izzy I love your wok but you could add mure ageate
A black cat lay on a hard mat.
Purring, the sighlent, cudly Taby cat snuggled down onto the ragged rug however it wasent very comfy.
Lazily, the fluffy cat scurried and plopped on top of lovely, smooth mat.
WOWZERS Year 2, I love all your sentences! I can tell you have worked your hardest!!
Excited for his nap, Timmy the plump blue cat clumsily sat on the fluffy white rug with a orange stain in the centre.
One foggy night the scruffy, black cat swiftly ran across the room for some milk.
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