First Steve built a house but then the creeper came and blew up the house. Then Steve put on a door and some torches and then went to sleep. The creeper came and blew up again. So the next time Steve builds a house he'll put on a iron door instead of a wooden door so the creepers don't blow it up again.
I love your writing about the clip. Your punctuation is perfect - clever girl. Try to start yur sentences in interesting ways. You could have written....
Even though Steve put on a door and added a couple of torches, the creeper cam and blew it up again.
Steve is mining a haws up . A creeper exploded the haws up. Steve biltit wons agen this time he mad iron doors to keep all of the creepers out.
Brilliant Calum! You have sounded out some of your words really carefully! Good work on capitals and full stops. Can you try to do more by yourself next time?
First Steve built a house but then the creeper come and blew up the house then Steve put on a door and some torches and then went to sleep the creeper came and blew up agaian so the next time Steve builds a house he , ll put a iron dooer instead fo a wooden door so the creepers don t , blow it up again .
Steve built a house. then the creeper came and blow the house up .Steve was feeling angry so he built another house with a door. the house was built with wood and glass panes. when Steve went to bed but the door was open the creeper came in and blow it up again.
Brilliant writing about the clip Jessica. I like he way you've used SO in one of your sentences, maybe you could try using the word because in a sentence too. Remember a capital after a full stop though!
Your sentences are absolutely fabulous Dreams! Year 2 will love looking at your Minecraft sentences. Keep up the hard work!
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.